Thank god Naruto's son did'nt get pink hair!

Sheerly amazing, one of the first fics I read, this fic is a spark of sheer genius. It is ranked in my top 5 favorites and is probably the 3rd best fic I have ever read and is one of the few fics responsible for inspireing me to create this account. Thank you for writing and great job!

NaruSaku is my favorite pairing as well. I have great expectations for this fic, LD 1449 is one my favorite writer on this site and this story is one his favorites, and so far it looks like it exceeds those expectations.

Man i love happy endings. Overall this story was amazing and i loved it. A was a great read, and a job well done.

I normally don't review in the middle of a completed fic, but I just wanted to tell you, if you don't know already, that Kyuubi's not the "real" name of the demon. Actually, Shukkaku can also be called Ichibi, since Ichi (as far as I know) means "one" and Kyuu means "nine", so Kyuubi is just a human-given name for the nine-tails, telling just the number of tails there are... so there are Ichibi, Nibi, Sanbi, Yonbi, Gobi, Rokubi, the next two I don't really know, I can't remember the vocabulary for seven and eight^^, and finally Kyuubi... But just as I say, if you already know then just ignore this, if you didn't either appreciate that I gave you that information or just say it doesn' matter and I shouldn't write you such a **^^

ok well im new to fan fic but i totlly agree with u on the whole narusaku pairing u should write another story close to this one its excellent and when im motivated enough i will finally move my ** to write my own naruto sakura fic

Great fic!

i dont mean to flame or watever but byakugan cant see clones (notice chunin exams with neji vs naruto) neji was only able to tell which one he THOUGHT was naruto because he was so called ''holding back'' but eh it just cliked in my head wen kakashi said he wanted the byakugan btw i believe its spelled Ichiraku

lol i like the dream i read it like 5 times...hehe its easy to get me to laugh

that was a great story i sat and read the whole thing in 1 go great job

1. Use line breaks to seperate your author notes from the story content.

2. Proof-read. You made a couple spelling errors and there are some sentences where a word or punctuation is missing.

3. So far it looks pretty promising, after I've been browsing through alot of crappy fics for the past hour.

that was awesome!

what about gaara?! did you forget him??!!

its ichraku! NOT ichiiruka!

great story ! keep it up!