Joya! heh i loved it! it was so cute...you stuck alot of detail in, that was nice. i liked it!

That was so cute! Hahaha, awesome writing Joya!!

You amaze me, Joya. This was wonderful. I love Lily/James and this was too cute.

Milka aka weasleyangel @ LJ.

Joya! XD This is so good. It's really cute. And you use such...good words. Like in the first paragraph o_o It's so descriptive. NICE JOB. Lily and James rock

WHOA! @.@ What beautiful writing! When I signed on to read this, I was expected a Joya-ish telling (with excited bumps on the way), but this is all lyrical prose! What beautiful descriptions; I love how James falls literally and figuratively. And how there are bits of humour rolled throughtout his introspective musings.

Well done, well done! (you shoulda gone to NYU! XP)

This was so wonderful...cute and fluffy and I love that you chose Lily and James. You've outdone yourself again, Joya. Me loves it!!

"No matter how much I tried to let my distaste for her get in the way, it always seemed that the bright fire of her spirit shone through the thick black cloud that seemed to hover over me."
Definitely one of my favorite lines. I love this!

Are you going to write more Lily/James??

I love it! It was short and sweet, perfect the way it is.

WOW. Totally not what I expected. It was very nice! You kept me guessing. Though at the end it was kinda cheesey and erm, weird. Like that thing about the water, I'm just not into that kind of fluff.

Lovely! Although I miss D/G... (my ship most definitly) Lol I was confused who it was at first, and wasn't going to read it if it wasn't DG. Now I'm glad i did.

Yep I'm glad you wrote it as James/Lily, it really is wonderful ^_^ I was grinning by the end of it and I still can't seem to stop smiling. At first I thought it was going to be a Draco/Ginny (my favorite pair so it's default in my head) but then I read "-both in their seventh year" and had a flash of "Oh hell no, better not be a Draco/Hermione". Anyway, love the work and must go read the other stories. Oh and I read Anthem last semester and I fell for it too, it was so sweet *smiles in memory*

-Sarah

Joya, you are an AWESOME writer and I don't know why you haven't tried to officially publish your works yet!
That was a really well-written story! Great job!

OMG1! JOYA, I love you!! This is so Beautiful! LILY and JAMES is THE BEST!! I loved the writing...and the descriptions...it was so...just so touching. I've never read such a great L/J story!! And be sure to know that I've read many. Once again, this is a wonderful, wonderful fic...you must really consider writing a Multi-chapter fic...

Oh, you're right! This story is gorgeously cute! I can so imagine it happening! One of the best Lily/James I've read in a while.

OMG! *stares* That is BEAUTIFUL. The words flowed so perfectly, and I can really tell that it was poetry that had inspired you in this writing. Bravo, Joya! ^^ This was really something wonderful.