.Aurorablu. 2005-05-05 . chapter 1Love the rhyme... Update soon! Or is it only one-shot?
meh...
Well
Catch tcha later!
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wildchild-loves 2005-04-18 . chapter 1aw have more confidence... ur a kick-** writer. i love the story btw
Laters |
AquiliusDivine 2005-04-02 . chapter 1yeah... if you doubt yourself, the reader doubts you. I genuinely like it. There are a few minor mistakes but overall it is very nicely written. It could do with a few more descriptions, I have a hard time visualizin without them... keep it up |
elektrik_storm 2005-03-31 . chapter 1 it doesn't suck! it is quite well written... i just think that the malfoy thing might have been a little sudden and out of character
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Courtney 2005-03-31 . chapter 1 That was a great start! Did you write the summary by yourself or did you get it from somewhere? Cause its really good! |
JessMess 2005-03-31 . chapter 1that story was good. don't put yourself down or other wise you might stop writing and we will never know how it finishes.
CYa |
Michelle Felton 2005-03-30 . chapter 1I don't think it sucks, I think it's rather good. I would love to read more of it if there is more. I really do like it. |
Sunshine-Girl03 2005-03-30 . chapter 1DAMN! This story is so good! I'd have 2 admit that it happened a bit fast, but that's cool coz most stories take 4ever to develop.
I'd like to see more soon!! |
princess brady 2005-03-30 . chapter 1hey- great fic...please get ready with the next cap. ^^
greez
princess brady |