Girl number 1 2005-03-26 . chapter 1This happens to be one of the best one shots I've read. It was completely cute and not only that but full of wisdom too. I loved the last part when you wrote He had come to her at last, and passed right under the window, like he had been doing for years. And the very last part But she had finaly found what she was looking for out the window.
Although you had like a small amount of spelling mistakes. Like finally is written with two l's not one. But that was like the only mistake well anyway it was lovely. I'm going to finish this review and go look for you're other work. You did a truly amazing job on this.
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