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Girl number 1 2005-03-26 . chapter 1
This happens to be one of the best one shots I've read. It was completely cute and not only that but full of wisdom too. I loved the last part when you wrote He had come to her at last, and passed right under the window, like he had been doing for years. And the very last part But she had finaly found what she was looking for out the window.

Although you had like a small amount of spelling mistakes. Like finally is written with two l's not one. But that was like the only mistake well anyway it was lovely. I'm going to finish this review and go look for you're other work. You did a truly amazing job on this.

GIRL NUMBER 1
Myddryn Emrys 2005-03-25 . chapter 1
Congratulaions on a beautifully written piece of Fan Fiction, it was simply and masterfully but together. There is a timelessness and wismy that makes you smile and imagne yourself there. I like it alot. Well done!
eternalstupor 2005-03-25 . chapter 1
Wow, very nice. Even though I'm not a Harry/Hermione shipper. It was very well thought out and very witty. I love the idea of the window. Hope to be able to read more from you.
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