Well-written, you've made complicated language flow beautifully.
Very nice. Has a good atmosphere.
Bye.

WOW, i love ur detail in this story. its so descriptive, i can picture everything without having to close my eyes. and i love draco too =). good job! continue

that is really cute! please continue!

The writing quality of this story is quite good, and your Lucius is very enjoyable.

whoa, your writing voice is amazing, alot of imagery and emotion behind all of it. you've conveyed the Lucius Malfoy i imagined perfectly. i love it.

Hey, I really liked this story and hope to see an update soon. I love reading stories about Draco. :)

you are a wonderfull writter, however I did not like this chapter much, because of how seriously your writting seems. I don't know, that's just my opinion...Please don't let this stop you from writting...as I said, it's just my opinion and im just one person...