OH! That was sweet! very nice, you really captured the characters well! nice one! shame we didn't get to meet Death though...

nice fic but susans hair is white with a black streak not the other way around

I disagree with you on the 'not really Discworld style' front, I think you've captured the essence of it here. Poignant, morbid, beautifully written. Your Ysabell/Mort interaction was absolutely priceless. *snorts, rereading the dress line* Gorgeous.

Wow. That was depressing.

cool. very pratchett. one thing, Susan had white hair with a black streak.

Aw! So sad. Well written, great style, and keep writing!
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That was great!