I love the title of ch. 2!
Just use a little more description. And you don't have to explain everything. (ex: you explain that Gringotts has dragons, mazes, etc.). This just takes up more time, and some people may skip over it. DON'T consider this for regular fiction, but if someone's reading a fanfic, they know the story. you don't need to go over every little detail. Or ignore me. I'm not brilliant enough to know what I'm talking about.
There's no more? WAH! Write more!

Whoohoo! Not a fan of Yugioh, but WHO CARES!
That was so cool. And weird! YAY! I'm high off my Easter Candy, so don't be too alarmed.
Ha. I just realized your pen name. Hamster. Ha.
I've gotta go read ch. 2 now!!

My my, the trio went poof. :D Very amusing. -is contemplating various theories on who robbed the bank and how- Anyway, keep up the good work! (Yes, Aunt Petunia was very ooc, but the scene was very sweet!)

Hm... I wonder who the two students are going to be... :D Anyway, I hope you update this moderatly soon, I'll be waiting. (and this is quite a fun mix by the way)

Nice mix here...very interesting! ^^

Thanks for the review on Fantasy Mayhem...but I'm gonna hafta pull it off of Fanfic for a while! I'll put it back up once I rewrite it. I lost the plot ages ago (is there even a plot?)

Whatever. Anyways, I think this is pretty good. ^^ Yesh...Update soon! Until next time!
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