You've done a wonderful job in capturing the world through Oshitari's eyes. It is something that flows most naturally in your tales. Nicely written. Very sweet. Very genuine. Very perseptive. Oshitari - in one word. Look forward to more of this series.

Sobz... Poor Jiroh and Oshitari... But Jiroh is more poor thing... Simply because I adore him and thinks that he should be with Atobe... Sobz...

interesting

Fwee!! AtoJirou ficlet!! oO... From Oshitari's POV... oO... Most are usually from Atobe's POV, it's a nice change of pace. Anyways, keep up the good work. ^_~