SharkSwimmer05 2005-11-09 . chapter 2 hey! ive read all ur GW fics and i LOVE THEM! PLZ update this soon! |
ZeroYui 2005-03-08 . chapter 22well... kinda short but okay. I mean, is Ana looking for protection now? Or is she just gonna stab Jin in the back? Can't wait for the next chapter, i hope there's some action in it. hm... wonder how Jin is going to torture Colin's soul... hm. Anyways, story's great so far. Keep up the good work. If only i could be doing as well on my story. Oh well. Keep writing, hope you get the next chapter soon. |
Ebony Light 2005-03-03 . chapter 22YES! Two chapters in one day, for me anyway. Please keep the updates coming so smoothly. I really appriciate it. Updates save me from withdrawl as I've mentioned before.
I love it when Jin's blood boils over, though it is a bit unsettling. His anger, umong other things, helps to remind us that he is human after all. Maybe he should get ** a little more. It's fun to read about the other pilots squirming.
I kind of figured Colin owned Titan Tech but I didn't forsee his involvment with the weapons of the previous war; I guess I should have.
I loved the chess scene. It provided the perfect comic relief needed after such a tense scene. Poor Stephen, but we love him becuase of it all.
I'm a little surprised it was Kreed and Anita who summoned Jin, but I'm not comlaining. I like not being able to know what is going to happen before I read it.
Please update soon so I know what happens between Ana and Jin. That should be an intersting conversation and it's wicked to leave me wondering. Withdrawl, remember? |
Ebony Light 2005-03-03 . chapter 21"Holy Zombie Jesus on a Pogo Stick." I absloutly fell in love with that line. I laughed my ** right out of my chair!
Good thing Jin has a quick eye other wise he may have missed that name. I'm interested to see exactally what Colin has done to be involved in EVERYTHING. It seems once again Oz has something to do with screwing life up again.
I wonder if Colin would have know Vance personally then, or if he would have met Rachel or Kreed briefly. That would certainly be a interesting plot circle.
Colin being involved in Vance's version of Oz would somewhat explain where Ana was during the previous war, but I would like some more explaination if you don't mind. I'm a very inqusitive person in case you haven't noticed.
Great job as usual Jin. |
Black Shadow Fox Shaman 2005-03-03 . chapter 22Easily amused. Nothing wrong with that though. Ana starting to show a new side... Nice job as always. |
mcmahon orton batista fan 1 2005-03-01 . chapter 21 you huge big evil person. what a clifhanger!!
On a more serious note, a brilliant chapter (i need a new word, all i ever say is brilliant) but hey you know me, i love this as usual!
Update!
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ZeroYui 2005-02-28 . chapter 21Great! Another chapter, another mystery! I love how you always do this, you give a little bit of info then you give another mystery, this is just great! i love your story, hope you get another chapter in soon, cant wait. What piece of info did Jin find? |
Black Shadow Fox Shaman 2005-02-28 . chapter 21Nice job... I got kinda confused at the end. I kinda assume that he had something to do with the pilots. The question is what? |
ZeroYui 2005-02-22 . chapter 20well... these last few chapters were a bit... disturbing, kind of. Ana is actually beaten (Sort of), and Jin has a strange feeling! So, did Vance die or is he still alive? (sorry if you put it in the last story, i tend to forget a lot of things) Keep up the good work, i love your story. hope you finish the next chapter soon. |
Beth 2005-02-22 . chapter 20 That was a good chapter but at the end you put end of chapter nineteen when it is twenty. might want to fix that so not to confuse people. I did read the first one that was good i liked it. I cant wait to read more of this story write more soon please |
Kage Kitsune 25 2005-02-21 . chapter 20Funny title for the chapter Jin... Nice job. Poor Ana finding trouble when she doesn't need it. |
Ebony Light 2005-02-21 . chapter 20This is certainly an interesting chappter, Jin. Again, I feel so sorry for Ana. I hope you give Collin and his trusty little side kick a good ** kicken soon. I can't decide who I want to pound the man though. Jin is the obvious choice but wouldn't it be a nice surprise if one of the other pilots decided to beat the man down? LOL! I just got a mental image of Rachel punching Colin over and over. She doesn't seem the type to put up with ** like beating your child. Sorry if I've only managed to tire you to tears. |
Ebony Light 2005-02-20 . chapter 18I feel special! I'm glad to help you out anytime Jin. By the way, I do request at least a little romance. I think a little love can deepen a plot and helps people to understand the characters a little bit better. However, it is your most excellent story and I'll accept what ever you write.
Poor Ana. You've definatly managed to make me feel sorry for her. Thanks for giving me avilian I can love to hate.
I'm gald to see Rachel finaly getting some gumption back. It does seem, as Anita said, that she's the only one Jin listens to when she fusses about his health.
Do Jin and Ana have some sort of pysic connection or something? That would certainly be interesting but why would it have not affected them in the past... or did it and we just don't know about it? |
Beth 2005-02-20 . chapter 18 That was really good. I was surprised what Colin did to Ana. It was a complete surprise and it was interesting because now i have some idea's on what might happen next. What she is goin to do, but you dont want us to say anything so i wont. And your right i havent read After Eve Gundam Wing: A New Heero but i will, maybe ill understand this one better. Am i right on that. well write more soon cant wait to see what happens next. It has me on the edge of my seat on what is goin to happen with Ana and everything. |
Kage Kitsune 25 2005-02-20 . chapter 18Nice job as always... and thanks for reviewing my Christmas story... |