I absolutely adore this story. And I hope you update soon and etc etc because Harry's reaction to Ron's comment was ACE! Totally brilliant, and I want to see it all unfold. I'm impressed.

I like this fanfic so far. i hope you continue updating.

Wow.. well, it took me a while to read it so far, but.. wow... This is an awesome story!! I love it, love it, love it!! I can't wait until the next chapter! -squeals- Ah man, now I'm all excited! There ain't no way I'm gonna be able to go to sleep tonight! And I have school tomorrow, too! Haha! Anyways, just thought I'd review the story thus far, and tell ya that, o'course, I LOVE IT! Keep up the good work! xD

The last two chapters were great, you have to update soon!! I especially liked the argument between Harry and Ron. Though I don't think they should be a couple, maybe just good friends.

Smiling softly, Albus shook his head. “Forgive me, my boy, if I can’t help but doubt that because for a war that doesn’t exist for you, it sure has cost you greatly.”

I think this sentence is a little weird. Perhaps it should be written:

“Forgive me, my boy, if I can’t help but think that for a war that doesn’t exist for you, it sure has cost you greatly.”

I like that Narcissa actually cares for her son. Lucius does too, I suppose, but not enough to support him. Many revelations for Draco during the conversation with Dumbledore. Hopefully, this will help him become more accepting of his new life.

Poor Snape. It must have been hard to turn his back on Draco like that. I hope Draco can forgive him when he finds out the truth. He will find out, right? It wouldn't be right for them not to reconcile one another after the war is over. And Harry finally realises what it's like to be in Dumbledore's shoes all the time, making such hard decisions. It's not as easy as it looks to give bad news.

Oh my, I feel so bad for Sev. He has to act like he hates the only person he probably truely loves. *tear*. I hope Draco starts to open up to Harry, and then friendship, and then Harry/Draco goodness! Update soon!

Very good!!

Good to know Lucius still cares, in his own way...

And you have to feel sorry for Sev.. Having to be so cruel to his precious godson!!

And poor, poor Draco!!

But go Harry!!
*Sings* Go Harry!! Go Harry!! Go, go, go Harry!! *End singing*

Oh and go 'Cissa!!

Also go YOU!! For writing this lovely story!!
*Sings again* Go Aoife!! Go Aoife!! Go, go, go Aoife!! *End more singing*

Nb. How do you say "Aoife"?

*Poke* *Poke* Update please.

=D

You said you needed poking to update so; *Poke* *Poke*

Really good, I really like this story!!

I like the quotes in every chapter. I find the slash a little out of place in this story. I don't have anything against it, but some stories are best left alone with no pairings at all. This one does well in dealing with familial, platonic relationships though. The way Dumbledore and Snape are being so protective of Draco is nice. Hope Draco gets his memory back soon. It can't be too safe to not have it. He'd be too vulnerable that way, especially since not everybody knows not to tell him. Can't blame Dumbledore for trying to spare him the pain, though. He has been through a lot already. Too bad Draco didn't have the guts to refuse the Dark Mark though, in canon. Then, everything would have been different.

Oh! That's so mean! How could leave it there?

On another note, I love it! Just PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon.

Oh damn. That's a straight forward way to put it. LOL. I mean damn! And I just have to say its down right adorable how Harry's blushing left and right. If you make Draco bottom in this fic I will cry. I swear by the way things are headed right now, please don't do the weird twist where Harry gets over confident out of no where and jumps Draco. Read too many of those. Aside from that the whole Harry making sex noise over pudding and Draco groaning was very cute!! It's funny how Draco hasn't caught on that Harry's crushing on Draco. I can't wait for your next update!! :]

Bullocks = cattle
Bollocks = testicles

"Before you, I always shined." - shone

I'm not going to list every error. I don't know what your betas are doing, but a good job isn't one of them.

You cannot, CANNOT, just leave me there! More... NOW!... please?

oh! that is a horrible cliffhanger!! i hope your next chapter will be up soon cuz im already anxious for it.
so, depending on how well this talk goes (well... probably not going to be a word used unless its following the word 'not'), i estimate that draco and harry will kiss within the next one to two chapters?
or... at least thats what im hoping for! their sexual tension is starting to get so thick, theyll soon be able to cut it like a knife through butter!