loved it! one of the best stories i've read! it was simple yet it was touching...you should write more fics on mitsui and rukawa...hehe im campaigning for more mitru writers!XD

Aww that was sweet. A bit short, borderlining (if there's such a word) on mush, but the last bit pulled it away from the brink. I don't know, I don't usually go for fics like this but yours is... short and sweet.

Okay, I'm not making sense, but suffice to say, I liked it. Touched something in me. Good job.