YES! BBxRea strikes again! :D Love every second of it, Alex! You wrote the characters perfectly. Good job!

I loved it! So please make Part 2! You must, I want to know what happens next! Keep Writing!

BTW~ Hehe Kron sounds like Jigsaw from the movie SAW, hehe did you see it?

very awsome, very well written. and Raven's still there! yay! I kinda hope Terra died in the blast but I'll be nice and shut my mouth XD

Haha, finally got arround to finishing, you got to let me know when I can read ch 12. Yay for R?BB fluff! That was very well written. funny thing about this review, I'm talking to you on MSN now too. but your not going to know that until you read this cuz I'm evil and such XD. finally everything seems to be falling into place. I was so out of it for a while, I was all like "but why are they in her head and how did they get there!?" lol

He chose Raven?! I gotta say, that was a pretty quick decision Beastboy made. It's not like Kron asked him who he loved more; he said the other girl would DIE; how could Beastboy make a decision at all? And speaking of that, what does Beastboy's choice of Terra or Raven (Terra, cough cough) have anything to do with whether Kron destroys the Earth or not? Why does he care?

Well, that's probably something to be developed in the next part of the trilogy, eh?

Again, your writing is too rushed. Believe me, I know what it's like to be on the verge of completing a good story. But you gotta take your time. The good thing about this kind of story is that, as the reader, it's easy for to put myself in the story and watch it play out from a first-person point of view. The plot has foundation and is extremely colorful, but you're barely scratching the potential to make this story truly exceptional, trilogy or not.

Hey, I'm no authority on writing fanfictions, so feel free to disagree with anything I say. And I do really like this story, except for when Beastboy - no, all the Titans abandon Terra. Just take the time to draw it out.

TERRA FOREVER! HAHA!

--ssj

Interesting introduction. I like the coldness...:)

I have to say that the Raven and Terra have both been out of character to varying extents. I really can't see Raven going up to Beastboy and saying, "I love you to death." Not that she can't end up with Beastboy, but it just should have been much more gradual.

Well, you've certainly stacked up some appreciable odds -- an army with several billion soldiers! It's gonna be tough to write this out, but I know you can do it.

I will say this: you should spend more time on each scene. You're not lacking detail; you're just rushing through, or at least it seems that way. If you slow the pace, things flow more smoothly and become easier to understand. But this IS good. The plot is what matters the most and you have that. I actually like these stories as much as the "masterpieces" because the plots are so pure. Seriously, I wish I could write one of those, but I'm too meticulous with detail-accuracy and making sure that everyone's in-character. You've got the gift, though. Call it an innocence, of sorts. It has nothing to do with good or bad skill, but rather it is the ability to pull a story straight out of your imagination. Never loose this gift, because most of us don't have it.

TERRA FOREVER! HAHA!

--ssj

The chapter was pretty good but it was really short though. I connot wait until chapter 12 comes out

I have to admit, I don't like Beastboy's revelation that he does not share Terra's love. I could try to convince you why he should want Terra instead of Raven, but it's your story and your views are (sadly) as valid as mine. Still, it seems that Terra is going to be pretty helpless now that she's "lost" Beastboy's love. Damn, I hate saying that.

To comment on your writing, your still is improved. Some sentences/phrases are passive, but it's not significant to distract the reader from what you're saying. I have noticed something, however, that could be improved upon. In simplest terms, I'd say to "let the reader figure stuff out." Try to avoid explaining a character's emotions or thoughts, or at least avoid going into excessive detail. It keeps the story flowing and gets the reader more involved. Sad to say, I'm even more guilty of this in my "Angel Tears" than you are in your "Terra Project." It's yeilded some good results in my newest story, though (even if I haven't had time to update in months), and I suspect that yours will benefit as well. Plus, it feels better to write, as you'll probably notice.

Good job and good luck,

TERRA FOREVER! HAHA!

--ssj

I thought the chapter was pretty cool but Raven should just kiss BeastBoy

Aw...this is VERY good keep writing please I LOVE it!

I thought the story was incredable. It must of taken alot of time to plan. and if you dont think this story is cool get off this website right now. I really hope he finishes it

Holy Crap is right Cyborg. This Kron dude sounds really dangerous. This story is getting more and more interesting by the minute. Poor Terra. She's being demond posessed again. :( I swear this stroy is so good. Can't wait for the next chapter! (and I'll try to see if I can come up with any ideas for this story) ^_^

wow, this is pretty damn good. I'll have to finish reading it later, My mother's kicking me off the comp. I can't wait to read more. Poor Rae Rae. your grammer and spelling is amazingly good, I can't find anything wrong, it awsome and such a heartbreaker. XD

This story is so,so, KICK **! To tell you the truth I really don't have any specific word to explain this story. I loved the little Robin and Starfire moments. Those parts made me smile alot. ^_^ This story is really, very good!