I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

this story great they both go into the desert never to be seen from again.

I think that you should have made a happy ending...it would have made the story much better!

i'd just like to say that you guys are horrible people for letting it end like that! lol... well maybe, you are great authors because you did instead of another stupid happily ever after story. at any rate, good job with the story... on to reading the sequel!

oh god, u'r stories r so beautiful!

Are you kidding me!? How could you possibly do that? That was the most horrid thing ever! Youre gonna make a sequal right? I do believe im going to cry. Are you freaking serious? I'm sorry, I'm not over the initial shock yet.. Give me a moment. Okay. I loved it! But the ending! I'm gonna kill it. Okay, I better stop writing before I commit murder.

GREAT STORY! IS THERE ANOTHER EPILOUGE COMING?
PLEASE SAY YES!

Sorry to say but your ending sucked. I'm not a dire Serenity and Endymion fan but your ending has no meaning to it. It's like they both died. With this type of ending you are very open to a sequel, but... then again you aren't because you killed off Serenity did you not? So basically I wasted my time reading this because this isn't even an ending. You two are good authors but I think you might need to work on your endings. A sappy lovesick ending would've been better than none at all.

hooooooooooooooo
0-0, 0_0, =_=!

what kind of end is this i love your job until the end,
first anger, then resignation.

*cries* what a sad sad ending! *cries some more*

Still in shock... THIS IS THE ENDING?!!!! Whao. It's so unexpected yet I like it! Though I'm a huge romantic, this ending just lets open possiblities! Wao. I hope you two write more great stories together soon.

Sorry im a tad late with this review but i kinda forgot about this story ^^* sorry! but this is a wonderfully written story but *turns chibi with big watery blue eyes* why did they have to die? not fair to me or them of course ^_~ *turns back*
Ja Ne!

AHHHHHHHHHH! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT???? WHAT KIND OF ENDING IS THAT???? *breathes in deeply* Ok. I'm ok. But why did you end it like that? All the time you had us thinking that they were going to make it--going to get together. Instead they just... died. *sobs hysterically* THAT IS SO UNFAIR!!!

NO WAY that's the end??? AGggrrr... I want to see what's next, i want to read more too.. But anyway, it's very good, keep up all the good works.

Um...that's it??!! I can't believe they both died! I'm so unhappy! I would have waited if it was a good ending!