QueenThayet12990 2006-01-07 . chapter 3Wow...very good, but somehow I doubt that you'll continue it, as it's been two years since you updated. Not good. Well, please update if you can, and please don't reply to my reivew as my mom dislikes all the emails. |
chiyoko 2005-08-09 . chapter 3 Please update soon. I like your story! Keep writing. |
Rebell 2005-01-07 . chapter 3hm. I guess Sirius didn't die? Or was that in the last one and i just missed it? Mmph, NEway, is Draco going insane? He's never been happy before. Never? Just wondering, are you going to continue this? You should. (not being bossy or anything, just my honest opinion.) Any action soon? Or is there another freaky dream? Are we going to have another Snape encounter and find out why he's so cold and heartless to poor Draco? Ok, no more questions, I have two to go. |
Ferret2 2004-12-23 . chapter 3*falls* What's wrong with Draco?! I mean, he's totally sexy just fainting all over the place and being all vulnerable like that, but what happened?! *dies* Update soon! I'm totally lovin' this fic!! XD
- Joya |
bigreader 2004-12-23 . chapter 3 i'm confused...severly...help...good chapter! but i'm confused as to why draco WAS HIM how can he do that? what was the potion? UPDATE SOON! |
Spinn 2004-07-16 . chapter 2Jonah, you really do improve with every single thing you write. I'm glad you decided to write a sequel for Fatum, and it's been unraveling very wonderfully so far. Keep writing, I can't wait for the next chapter. Great plot and storyline, nice characterization, and beautiful writing. :D |
Joya 2004-07-15 . chapter 2 "He did not trust himself to sleep."
I love that line!! How terribly haunting! I'm totally keeping that to use other places!! *cackles*
And Harry and Ron playing with the cards RIGHT after Draco's intense dream was so great! XD But does this mean Draco has... an INNER EYE!??!?! Dun, dun, DUN! :O!
Anyway, I love devil Draco!! XD I love how he made phun of Ginny thinking naughty thoughts! XD Silly boy!! *pokepokepoke*
Looking fwd to chapter 3!! Yay!
Maguire, you retard! SPEAK once in a while! THINK! I want to know what you're so happy and confident about!! *dies* |
Eiko 2004-07-09 . chapter 1 *pastes comment from HBB* XD;
*hugs Ron and Draco's greetings* E! This is the only reason I like D/G fics! I get to have angry!Ron~ :3 That little happy face thing about azkaban made me laugh. XD;
THEY'RE GETTING MARRIED! |
Twerksie 2004-07-09 . chapter 1I love it, Jonah!!
Especially Sirius and Remus and pretty much everything else!! *jumps around*
It's a great fic, Jonah. And the ferret!! That was SO FUNNY!
Nice job, you've gotten my hyper. ^^ |
Joya 2004-07-09 . chapter 1 YAY! The reviews are working again! I read this last night (or this morning) at 2AM my time... so I kinda sorta read it first... kinda. ^^;
I loved the welcome sign at Azkaban! *rofl* I can so see that, too!!
And Draco seems SO sweet... he went all the way to Azkaban to wish Pansy a Happy Christmas because he remembered that she didn't have any family left... and then she had to go actin' up like a lil 'tard!! *whack*
Remus trying to learn Quidditch is too cute! XD
And D/G is cute!
And R/Hr is cute!!
And the best dialogue was the greeting between Ferret and Weasel!! XD
But the BEST of all is... MOMMA'S BOY! *squee* So cute!
I keep imagining Draco as Tom, though... which isn't all that bad. *smirks*
Anyway, this is most definitely a SMASH! Absolutely smashing, I say!! ;) Keep up with it!
Remember... in posting this chapter, you've totally signed your life away.
*grins* CHAPTER TWO! |
Joya 2004-07-09 . chapter 1 YAY! The reviews are working again! I read this last night (or this morning) at 2AM my time... so I kinda sorta read it first... kinda. ^^;
I loved the welcome sign at Azkaban! *rofl* I can so see that, too!!
And Draco seems SO sweet... he went all the way to Azkaban to wish Pansy a Happy Christmas because he remembered that she didn't have any family left... and then she had to go actin' up like a lil 'tard!! *whack*
Remus trying to learn Quidditch is too cute! XD
And D/G is cute!
And R/Hr is cute!!
And the best dialogue was the greeting between Ferret and Weasel!! XD
But the BEST of all is... MOMMA'S BOY! *squee* So cute!
I keep imagining Draco as Tom, though... which isn't all that bad. *smirks*
Anyway, this is most definitely a SMASH! Absolutely smashing, I say!! ;) Keep up with it!
Remember... in posting this chapter, you've totally signed your life away.
*grins* CHAPTER TWO! |
Joya 2004-07-09 . chapter 1 YAY! The reviews are working again! I read this last night (or this morning) at 2AM my time... so I kinda sorta read it first... kinda. ^^;
I loved the welcome sign at Azkaban! *rofl* I can so see that, too!!
And Draco seems SO sweet... he went all the way to Azkaban to wish Pansy a Happy Christmas because he remembered that she didn't have any family left... and then she had to go actin' up like a lil 'tard!! *whack*
Remus trying to learn Quidditch is too cute! XD
And D/G is cute!
And R/Hr is cute!!
And the best dialogue was the greeting between Ferret and Weasel!! XD
But the BEST of all is... MOMMA'S BOY! *squee* So cute!
I keep imagining Draco as Tom, though... which isn't all that bad. *smirks*
Anyway, this is most definitely a SMASH! Absolutely smashing, I say!! ;) Keep up with it!
Remember... in posting this chapter, you've totally signed your life away.
*grins* CHAPTER TWO! |
bigreader 2004-07-08 . chapter 1*yells at pansy* Why is Draco not happy? He loves Ginny. Right? RIGHT?!? update soon! Man I love your stories. They always have a plot...my story has no plot what-so ever. UPDATE SOON~!~ |
remembrances 2004-11-27 . chapter 2Keep writing, this is so good! I love your writing! |