"Second fiddle". I LOVED that description of Draco! XD Gah! I totally wanted to hug Draco at the way he was all 'fiddling' with his fingers and stuff... *squee* Great idea with the floo mix-up! ^^ If only we could get JKR to read this... wonder what she'd think. You've done the scene much justice from what we know thus far... :) Kudos, man!

Nice one, Jonah...You pulled it off quite nicely. That bit where Nott squeezes the rose and lets his blood drip down...great work! ^^

Ever since I went to JKR.com I was wondering when this scene would pop up on ff.net. It finally has, and I'm thrilled. You did a very good job of this and kept the same voice as the canon. Write on!

Brilliant Jonah! A wonderfully thoughtful, descriptive piece. I love how Draco's character is wavering so much that even Harry noticed! And all from Harry's point of view! *hugs Harry*

Your writing is so smooth; it flows marvelously. Congrats on a job well done.

Excellent writing. Excellent writing.

I don't know what to say, but your writing skills are brilliant. Positively wonderful.