Joya I loved it! Ur such a great writer! I had never read that one before.. pretty good squeaks!

Jodi

i have to say, even though i don't usually enjoy HPs POV, i liked this one. I don't think you failed miserably, just... hmm. Change, Lost Lightning. Deep. I'll think on this and write a review that doesn't suck so bad.

Wow, Joya! That's really good! You're word choice is wonderful. The story is quite sweet and sentimental. I think the ending is my favorite part. It really makes you think, not only about him but about your own life. (I kinda suck at writing reviews, so sorry...)
Alexis

Really interesting story Joya! I am happy to read a Harry ficlet. :) It was kinda creepy and I like how just a moment in Harry's life was explained like that. I mean that would be 5 seconds in a movie. Anyways, I enjoyed it, nice work.

you are a brave and deep thinker to touch on such lovelyness Joya. if its something you might want to explore the depths of (symbolic growth of an adolescent) I think you'd be *brilliant* to do so. its one of the vains of literature. ... er, anyway. cool HP ficlet! :-)

I thought it was pretty good. I liked how you didn't once mention his name in the story but everyone should have known who he was. It was pretty creepy, you like making scary fics don't you? Anywho, great job!

hahha feels proud! i got the "about time" part before reading the author's note XDD; usually im clueless but i got it this time ^^;; I really like it ^_^ at first, i thought he was going to get killed, you know? cuz at the part talking about the wheels and the wrench being destroyed i thought =O are they going to kill him ?!?!?! but adulthood..pretty funky, joya ^_^

I did more than 'halfway enjoy it'. This is really fantastic work. I've been reading all yall's writing and I am impressed and addicted. Your fics seem to fit right in to the real flow of Harry Potter exept go deeper even.

Aw...so awesome! I love Harry! You really capture the drearyness of the evening in this one. I got the picture of the rainstorm and the gloomy mood perfectly.
I liked the wrench symbolism. Especially the emphasis on "He".
Good job, all around!

The wrench! The wrench in the gears and the gears of the fate! XD *LOVES it*
No no no! Joya didn't fail! Joya just misplaced the darkyness. ;D Now do Draco!