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shadowcat15 2004-08-18 . chapter 1
Yay! Two of my favorite Slytherins in the same story!

This is something that I've always wanted to happen. For Draco to actually make his own decisions and to break away from his father.

This story is one way for him to do so. Thank you for writing this wonderful story of a scene that I wish JK would write in the books.
Taika 2004-07-02 . chapter 1
Oh, this was VERY GOOD! You have a lot of tallent. I can see Snape making a speach of this type to Malfoy some time in the future and you did it very well. Draco was not out of character. He held his pride, and respect for his teacher and father. He also was not beyond reach, meaning that his thoughtfulness at the end was not beyond reason. It could happen. And Snape's speach was very touching. Smiles, Taika
purpleyin 2004-03-22 . chapter 1
i really liked that, it was very well done. i've read a few fic with similar plot and this was the best.
Ms. Lit 2004-03-20 . chapter 1
YES THANK YOU SO MUCH. You have one if the rarest talents amount the sea of fanfiction writers. You keep the characters in character. I have read very few stories where the characters were so well fitted. Bravo.
deviled_angel13 2004-03-17 . chapter 1
it was great, like usual , all your stories are.
Write more soon
yuyin 2004-02-18 . chapter 1
Love it! nice start and want more now!
I think you need to space out a bit, it is really to read this way.
Anyway, please DO update soon :)
prexus 2004-02-16 . chapter 1
ooh .. i like it. x] i really like your title. :D
Fantasy101 2004-02-08 . chapter 1
This is a great story! R u doin more? You should! PLEASE^_~
MioneMalfoy92 2004-02-06 . chapter 1
This is a very good story. It has few spelling mistakes. But it doesn't reveal much about Draco, His Father, or Snape. Nor does it reveal much about what Snape is talking about.
Spinn 2004-02-06 . chapter 1
I liked this a lot. :D Another awesome story! Keep writing it! I really like how it turned out. Everything sounds good. =D
Calendermod 2004-02-05 . chapter 1
You are so amazing Jonah, I half wish you would fall off the face of the planet so I wouldn't be so jealous. XD
Ok, maybe a little less than half.
AnimegirlHF 2004-02-05 . chapter 1
Oh...You are truly a master writer!! This was great! I loved it! And it's so true. He IS going to have to make that decision eventually...I wonder what side he'll take in the actual books...Hmm...something to think about, eh? Anyways, great job! ^_^ I'll be looking for more of your stuff! Ciao for now!
emma 2004-02-05 . chapter 1
continue!!
NorseGirl 2004-02-05 . chapter 1
I want more! That was WONDERFUL! It was very well written. When I got to the end I was sad to see that there was no more. Please, Please update soon. These are my two favorite characters. :)
Soot Box 2004-02-05 . chapter 1
This is a really good story. Update Soon.
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