this is SICK, in the good way, of course. boy, what a picture you paint. the last line just kills; fantastic way to end.

i had to review this story. first off, i usually hate catherine stories, but i have to admit, i couldn't get enough of this. your skill in writing is nothing like i have seen before. i cannot begin to explain how excellently you wrote this story, how well the words and story line flowed. it...i cannot even explain how awesome and unbelievable this story was. keep it up, and i look forward to future stories of yours.

Oh my God, Oro, where in the world did you come up with the first paragraph? It's frightening, and pretty, and damn.
-- He never said, “I love you” during sex, because maybe he didn’t, so you never said it, either.--
A delve into the psyche of Catherine and her frelled up relationships. :-(.
--.. you pretended to lick the filthy silver to get the cash flowing.--
And your imagery rules once more.
--You thought it was the start of what would turn out to be a really good day.--
Killer ending, Vegas.