Cool chappie! Update soon!

taboo, taboo, too much taboo! BUT other than that word, this is a great story. Just look for a different word because being too repetitive is redundant and makes the word lose meaning. Keep it up!

AWESOME! tht was really cool!! UPDATE SOON, kay?
~aurora

hmm do u think u could add borders or sumtin so we know when it a diff scene b/c its kinda confusing w/o 'em...whoa poor mer, mars & ven *sniff*
i like how u incorperated the real SM w/ur ff

ello again
"The longer you can wait, the more you know you truly love each other. Isn't that right, Mars?" Venus winked, and Mars paused her pacing and blushed slightly."--LOL
wait the scouts had soul mates w/the gen *sniffle*
awwe poor sere & evey1...wait y r the M&E enemies?

awesome story! write more so I can read more!

Hey! Cool fic! Please update soon!

hm wow i just realized u uploaded this in 1 day...kewl
that was a cute hello btwn loves...awe kun suprises ven w/a kiss cuteness...jeje mer corrected jup *giggle*
"The vote needs to be unanimous..." Mercury started. No, I am Princess Serenity of the Moon, and I say majority rules!"--jeje she is the princess & they r on her planet
tee they got married ^.^
*sniffle* poor darien his parents died--that sux & pooe Q sere her bf died as well
whoa is ven preggies? ..hm where do they all live, r like 4 of 'em on earth & 4 on the moon & do they routate?...whoa-ho mars & ven "?se comieron el pastel?"--jump the gun?? *wink wink* naughty
*sniffle* poor Q serel so sere father was an earthling aye...jeje & they met b/c of gae
that was kewl...can't wait 4 the nest chappie ^_^ later

awe i liked their relationship--the whole knowin ea other all their lives, but not c'in ea oth 4 awhile thang...wait if the earth & moon have good realtions y is it 4bidden?
jaja jed 'showin mars around' aya? *smirk* " This made Mars and Jadeite giggle. Jadeite was not meant to giggle; he looked completely unusual."--JAJA!!
" Princess Mercury's eyes widened, and she blushed. Jupiter and Venus looked at Mercury, as this was new news to them."--jaja she outted her *laughs*...hmm nice lil et tu goin on...jeje mer is right bout them ya know
lol this is gr8t mars w/a hicky!!..jaja
tee i luv the way u write them...hmm nice intro 2 beryl

tee that was a really cute beginin i luv'd it & the kissin scene was mondo cute ^.^ i esp likes:"...[Venus] appeared and stamped her foot. The two broke apart suddenly,leaving Endymion grinning and Serenity blushing."--tee...oh & he so likes her *wink*

Wow! Best Fic I've read in a while. Good pacing and dialouge. Keep writing!