  Wrenn8811 2005-11-26 . chapter 2Great Story, a little bit of mystery, and angst looking good.
More Please |
| twinkletoes22 2005-01-21 . chapter 2 I have never read a story that characterized Draco the way you have in yours. The plot stikes me as one of the most original plots I have ever read in a D/G as well. Nice job. It's refreshing to read a D/G that strays off of the convential path of its category. |
| LauraWilson 2004-12-20 . chapter 2 Hey, this is awesome, really. Please keep it up |
| Joya 2004-12-12 . chapter 2 Jonah, I accidentally FORGOT to read chapter 2! But it's better I read it late since you take FOREVER to update! But OMG, this's so good! Do you have an actual plot in mind? Because this's going so well so far! I had to reread the first chapter too because you tend to forget the exact plot of something after over a YEAR, and I remember how I reviewed the first chapter... I love how Draco's the sky! XD And for some odd reason I find it sadistically adorable that Draco's all vulnerable now because he's 'insane'... Anyway, I'd really like to know more of what happens, Jonah! Please update soon! :) |
| Megate Amber 2004-10-15 . chapter 2 this took a while to read!
great chapter!!
please update soon!! |
| zafaran 2004-09-13 . chapter 1 This is a wonderful start, but could you *please* continue? Pretty please? I'd really like to find out what happened since it's got a wonderful narrative hook in the synopsis, and you've established two nicely shaped characters. |
| Spinn 2003-12-31 . chapter 1 This started off really nicely. I really love your writing style. I hope you write some more soon. ^^ But if you have to write something - *pokes Fatum* Just kidding. ^^;; This was awesome, though, can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Crazylily54 2003-10-06 . chapter 1 YAY!! *pokes*
That was pretty GREAT! Dunno why, but it's pretty depressing...but still, very few authors can do that! |
| Bleu Pearl 2003-10-05 . chapter 1 I really like the way you write :)
Great start, can't wait to read more :)
~ Bleu |
| ifitaintbroke88 2003-10-05 . chapter 1 i think the story is good so far i just hope the whole thing isn't depressing. UPDATE! |
| Goldengirl2 2003-10-05 . chapter 1 A werid fic but written good |
| legendgsd@yahoo.com 2003-10-05 . chapter 1 Really great! I like your style, and hope you will continue! |
| Ferret2 2003-10-04 . chapter 1 *huggle squashles* Yay!! I'm so glad you took my advice and posted this! I love it way too much! My favorite part was Draco and his comparison to the sky and how he'd become his father's sky! |
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