Fantasticly well written as always.
I eagerly awit ur nxt fic.
:o)

Absolutely gorgeous. The way you show Toby's character through his words, and your ability to describe is truly amazing. Such a fitting ending. Nice work.

Just lovely! I can't wrap my head around your words...they are just so perfect, and just so Toby. My favorite passage: "His hand reaches to touch a child, and another child, and the instinct of having to do everything twice has already settled deep inside him that he doesn’t notice it at all anymore, not like he used to. His hands run over noses like Andi’s and eyelashes like his. Sleep comes easily to them, naturally, and he finds himself envious."

Thanks for sharing!