I really liked this. There isn't much Jeremy/Dan around and I think that's a shame. I thought you did well with the characterizations of both of them and handled the Dan/Casey and Jeremy/Natalie aspects of the story well.

Very nicely done. :)

There is something so absolutely right about this story. I've read it many, many times. Thank you for writing it.

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great story! i loved it.

great story! i loved it.