.mangoseed 2007-12-27 . chapter 1That was a beautiful idea, but I feel that it was a bit... dry? I liked it a lot, but I almost feel as though you were holding something back - a description or some sort of profound trope to really affect the heart of the fic. Nonetheless, lovely as always. Well done. |
Renorin and Aerion 2007-07-30 . chapter 1I think I'm gonna cry. I always wondered why Yuna cried during that moment, and this is a wonderful view, I think. I love your ideas, and the writing style is easy on the...eyes? Ears? It's soft and sort of calming.
~Aero |
Lilithas 2007-02-12 . chapter 1Oh wow. Just...WOW.
This fic is slightly old (I just stumbled on it luckily!), but there's a possible chance that you'll get this review, so I'll just say it...this was amazing. I dont think anyone could've described a sending better, because you make it seem so bitter sweet.
Wonderful job! |
Fiona Summoner 2005-01-04 . chapter 1This is beautiful. I love it.
Yes. This, I think, I shall be adding to my favourites list.
Keep at it. I want to see more. :)
~Fif |
The Jack of Spades 2003-12-03 . chapter 1Very touching. The second paragraph in particular really got to me... |
lynnxlady 2003-11-28 . chapter 1Incredible. Sad but beautiful. Damn it, I'm floored by it, especially the stream of consciousness feel to the third-to-last paragraph in the first scene. |
Baby Rose 2003-08-24 . chapter 1Wow...I haven't played all of FFX, but I did see the Funeral after Sin attacked Tidus's boat, and that was touching just watching her (much as I don't like Yuna) and you just added so much more emotion to it it's not even possible to put into words. You did a very good job putting her feelings into perspective, and those people's. Nice job. |
Rosa Heartlily 2003-08-13 . chapter 1Wow! I cried, I really did. That was beautiful. The rush and confusion of the emotions of the dead sounded really plausible, and I loved the touch at the end.
I'll never watch Yuna dance in quite the same way again... |
mandyfanforevr 2003-08-10 . chapter 1Wow... that was great. It just makes me wonder how she does it, such feeling... keep on writing, you are definitely good at it! |
Emmy aka Angel Aphrodite (too lazy to sign in) 2003-08-08 . chapter 1 Wow! That was absolutely amazing! *throws roses* You are talented and you did such a good job of capturing her character. I'm in awe! Wow, wow, wow! |
Psycofoxx 2003-08-08 . chapter 1 Very good. |
Alana 2003-08-08 . chapter 1 That was lovely, and sad. You should really write more, you've captured Yuna perfectly. |
Rikkoshaye 2003-08-06 . chapter 1For the first time ever, I don't really know what to say... That was... sad. In a good way. Very beautiful, but... sad. There are just no words, you know? |
51 2003-08-06 . chapter 1 This is really quite stunning. Please continue to write- I enjoyed your other piece as well! |
Rose 2003-08-06 . chapter 1 That was amazing, a beautiful piece of work. Your writing has great detail and form. Wow. |