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.mangoseed 2007-12-27 . chapter 1
That was a beautiful idea, but I feel that it was a bit... dry? I liked it a lot, but I almost feel as though you were holding something back - a description or some sort of profound trope to really affect the heart of the fic. Nonetheless, lovely as always. Well done.
Renorin and Aerion 2007-07-30 . chapter 1
I think I'm gonna cry. I always wondered why Yuna cried during that moment, and this is a wonderful view, I think. I love your ideas, and the writing style is easy on the...eyes? Ears? It's soft and sort of calming.
~Aero
Lilithas 2007-02-12 . chapter 1
Oh wow. Just...WOW.

This fic is slightly old (I just stumbled on it luckily!), but there's a possible chance that you'll get this review, so I'll just say it...this was amazing. I dont think anyone could've described a sending better, because you make it seem so bitter sweet.

Wonderful job!
Fiona Summoner 2005-01-04 . chapter 1
This is beautiful. I love it.

Yes. This, I think, I shall be adding to my favourites list.

Keep at it. I want to see more. :)

~Fif
The Jack of Spades 2003-12-03 . chapter 1
Very touching. The second paragraph in particular really got to me...
lynnxlady 2003-11-28 . chapter 1
Incredible. Sad but beautiful. Damn it, I'm floored by it, especially the stream of consciousness feel to the third-to-last paragraph in the first scene.
Baby Rose 2003-08-24 . chapter 1
Wow...I haven't played all of FFX, but I did see the Funeral after Sin attacked Tidus's boat, and that was touching just watching her (much as I don't like Yuna) and you just added so much more emotion to it it's not even possible to put into words. You did a very good job putting her feelings into perspective, and those people's. Nice job.
Rosa Heartlily 2003-08-13 . chapter 1
Wow! I cried, I really did. That was beautiful. The rush and confusion of the emotions of the dead sounded really plausible, and I loved the touch at the end.

I'll never watch Yuna dance in quite the same way again...
mandyfanforevr 2003-08-10 . chapter 1
Wow... that was great. It just makes me wonder how she does it, such feeling... keep on writing, you are definitely good at it!
Emmy aka Angel Aphrodite (too lazy to sign in) 2003-08-08 . chapter 1
Wow! That was absolutely amazing! *throws roses* You are talented and you did such a good job of capturing her character. I'm in awe! Wow, wow, wow!
Psycofoxx 2003-08-08 . chapter 1
Very good.
Alana 2003-08-08 . chapter 1
That was lovely, and sad. You should really write more, you've captured Yuna perfectly.
Rikkoshaye 2003-08-06 . chapter 1
For the first time ever, I don't really know what to say... That was... sad. In a good way. Very beautiful, but... sad. There are just no words, you know?
51 2003-08-06 . chapter 1
This is really quite stunning. Please continue to write- I enjoyed your other piece as well!
Rose 2003-08-06 . chapter 1
That was amazing, a beautiful piece of work. Your writing has great detail and form. Wow.
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