This is really interesting. Can't wait to read more!

Please update soon I will be waiting for another update.

w00t!! this be awesome!! :D

OKay, right off the bat (giggles, but no pun intended), you need to consider yourself a very, very good writer. I'm reading a story that's more than one chapter long, and gets updates slowly. That is really rare, so you're really good!
I like your stories (drowning and breathing were awesome as well, I don't know if I reviewed those but that's how I found you!) and this one's keeping me guessing! Good work!

Took me long enough to find this story again without knowing the name of it! Any new idea for it?

i really like this story. i think it would be pretty sad if you were one of those writers that starts a story and then abandoneds it. espesially a story as good as this one.

Wow, I just found and read all of this today, and it's definitely one of the better written and plotted Pokemon stories out there.

XD I haven't even read Pokemon or anything, in, like, two or three years, but someone posted an Avatar: the Last Airbender icon that made fun of evolving (CaterZuko), and...yea.

So, anywho, awesome story, can't wait till you update...whenever that may be.

I would love to find out how misty and Ash react to the discovery of their chidren while Brock meets the doctor joy that is his wife. A teenage joy still in medical school for brock's daughter would also be a great plot twist. The bargain turns out to be for the ketchum offspring. Turn them over or stay trapped in their own future. Personally it sounds like a test to me. Wounder how it will turn out?

I really like this story.It's very interesting. Please update soon!

AAML 4Ever!

It seems the group has traveled to the future. I wonder were the future ash & co. are.

woah this is good! please continue, i want to know what happens... one suggestion though, maybe if u make the plot move just a teensy bit faster. I just really want ash and co to meet the kids again and read more fluffy moments!

UR DOIN A AWESOME JOB WITH THIS STORY.
just keep it up with the updatin and i'll keep it up with the reviewing
the conversation was kinda funny, but its a good thing, to make the mood lighten up abit.
when are they ganna meet up with older Broak and the others?
when r older Misty and Ash ganna come in?
was tht missin trainer future Ash?
i've read some mistery stories but ur's one of the best, i just hope u update soon, i really wanna know wat happens next.
Catch ya later!

i LOVE this story. i think the plot is awesome, you add just the right amount of mystery to make me want to keep reading and reading, and i hope you really quickly update. i love how you involve all the characters and not just pay attention to only ash and misty, you also involve brock. i like you make all the characters have personalities. on an other note, i love bats too. totally off the subject but my dad manages a mine, so i have a bat fanatic father. little brown bats are the ones here. :P anyway update soon

this 8is a great achepter keep writing more i hope the relizations come soon fore all otf them cant wait ot read the next chapter!

PLEASE update soon!