excellent story. there were some confusing spots, and a few unanswered questions, but overall it was very well written.

Aw.. I have reviewed to this story but I figured while I was on my splurge...

Great story, cant wait to read more. Rather interesting. Love the story.

I thought this was a lovely story and I'm glad I found it. Yes, your writing style improved and you have a wodnerful story telling ability. I loved it! ^_^

Narcissa Amourje? Love the french. I hope you actually know french, and so know that it's supposed to be the other way around, and if that's all true, then I compliment you on the artistic lisence and commend the fine job on the story.

Wow! I LOVE IT!! Totally cool. Well, I know you ended up doing a sequel, so I'm off to read that. However, I really do like your writing style, you keep the people directly in character. Which is just a funny way of saying you totally rock at this, maybe even rivalling JKR herself. I like the new version of Draco, nice(er) but still sarcastic and funny.
You mentioned a few chapters back that you like the Animorphs, especially Tobias. Ya, me too, except my favorite is Marco. Back to this fic...
Well, what else is there to say? Oh, doesn't the backward writing say I Show Whate You Cannot See? Is that even this story? lol
Wow, long review. Um, just wondering, where did you get the idea for Voldemort to come back inside Draco? Just a random thing, or was it planned? Ok, i'm really off this time. Awesome story.

i was reffered to the story by beth.. i read the story.. and i think you should do a 20th chapter.. maybe like.. just to give everyone a glimpse of the draco/ginny loveness..etc.. please?

and as a note.. impedimenta is a spell for slowing something down not something like a stunning one..

and blaise by the way is a guy.. go check the j.k. rowling site.. XD

Lol thanks for the review... none of my stories ar that good becuase all the ones I HAVE posted are from like NOVEMBER of last year lol. I have muhc improved on my writing, but I have a trouble sticking to my stories. urrg lol

Yeah actually this is the first story I think I read by Ferret2, though I don't think I reviewed- I should have of course, since reviews make the world go round! ;) I loved this fic by the way- whoever wrote it lol! I love Draco/Ginny... don't know why but...

I'm currently working on a. that One Petal Falls one b. a songfic c. a prequel and then the story that is related to the songfic and then d. another random fic lol

I should probably post them, since I have like 6 chapters in each but my darling BETA won't RESPOND lol... hehe :sheepish grin:

ANyways, I don't get much reviews, and if I do, they sure as hell aren't long, so I just want to say how much I enjoyed your review

or whoevers review

thats kind of confusing lol

anyway, I love your stories, read the aspargus (sp?) one too- it was great lol and i was laughing... i laugh a lot
hehe

anyway, ill go now but ill keep watching for you to update that last chapter!

Luv frum Muah!

*points* I'm first in the thank-you notes! Whoopa!!

And I would've reviewed sooner, but as soon as I got home from Europe, jet lag was so awful, so I took a nap, then woke up and began reading F19!! XP But hey... I think I got 100th review! Yay for getting into the 3-digits!! XD

Anyway, WOW. That's a nice, simple way to put it! I beta-ed most of what was in the first part of this chapter, but the last bit where you finally brought the D/G ship together was stunning!! I loved it thoroughly, man!! Unlike many D/G fics, the D/G ending was very believeable and plausible, so kudos for that!!

Your Harry and Draco scenes are the greatest! Always gets Draco even more sarcastic than he already is, which is so phunny and great! Actually, this whole chapter had loads of phunny stuff in it and my absolute FAVORITE was the Harry/Mission Possible thinger! LOL! XD

So yeah... you finished your first ever WHOLE fic! Congrats, duke! I'll do that some day... but the fact that I've STARTED one is a grand accomplisment for me! Heh. But even after I finish MY first fic, you'll continue to be my fic inspirer and one of my besterest best friends. :)

Awesome job on the fic, Jonah! You've done Draco, D/G, and me all the justice we deserve! ;) Hope to see more writing soon-- it's SUMMER!! w00t!

OMG THAT WAS AMAZING! I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS WONDERFUL ENDING! AND ALL I HAVE TO SAY IS: SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL SEQUIL! and did i mention i think there should be a sequil. lol. anyway i think this story is one of my favorites (out of TONS!). and i cant wait to see your next MASTERPEICE because i will DEFINITELY read it!

This is really good. You should definatly put up a sequel.

That was beautiful.

Brilliant, Jonah. Your last chapter is just inspired. I love the flurry of POVs, and how you didn't kill Harry! (which, I will admit, I was afraid of!!) Brilliant ending, I love Ginny especially...she's a bit of a spitfire, but more of a good, innocent soul, which is just lovely. And, of course, you understand Draco so very well...as only you truly could. Congrats

OH MY GOSH! i love this story. You have the cutest funniest lines and scenes along with all the wonderful drama (dont worry, its not over done)! this is my favorite story right now! so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! i know you probably have alot to do right now, but i htink i might hqave a heart attack from the suspense! And dude its been like 6 MONTHS! so please update soon. ill look for your future works. UPDATE SOON!

YAY! ^_^ I've finally finished all the chapters you have written so far! XD I wasn't a shipper of any HP characters at first, but now I'm a D/G shipper because of your story! It's great! :3
"The world never told me it loved me"--*_* my, that's a GREAT quote. It's so..profound O_O;;
Let me know when you've written the next chapter, 'kay?